If anyone has any feedback on these concepts, please don't hesitate to post it up. I'm looking for feedback and suggestions on general concept (is it funny, do you get it -- as much of it as there is to get, etc?), staging, phrasing of dialogue, etc.
Possible dialogue for this sequence:
That's it, he's cut off!
Curse you, Sharktopus, I told you this would happen!
No more fuzzy navels for the pseudopod!
Fine, but you're going to have to drive him home!
2 comments:
"I don't care what they do in Japan!"
Brilliant!
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